Just had a listen to the demo - great opening - nice voice. looks like you had a great team - which is rare - so good stuff.
Would love to hear a bit more conversational out of you - lots of announcer in here - so this may be something to consider for future. Also try and cut that back to 1 min- the only reason is even though the spots are good, I hear the same announcer type read in a few of the spots - you don't want to have ANY of them repeated....
Still a great demo here - my notes are more agency fussy - so if you ever want to work on breaking those announcer habits, let me know and I'd be happy to help you. Doing a webinar tonight with VOXtra on that very subject in fact!!
Great work. I'm sure you're seeing work coming your way!