A little re-worked..
Hi Steve -
Nice demo. You have a great voice and are very versatile. I didn't hear the previous permutation of your demo but I think this one sounds really good. The only comments I have is maybe replace or remix one of them, where you can put some "production" into it so they aren't all monologue or narration, And 2, maybe consider switching the first two spots with each other.
Terrific. Loved the variety and range. I am envious of your ability to transition to so many different styles. You've
obviously been doing this a while.
Keep up the good work.